Thursday, April 24, 2014

Review: The Substitute (Kinky Mom), by Molly Prude



Moving to a new town is always fraught. It's usually not pornographic. Given the type of blog you're reading, you might suspect that Serenade Springs is an exception.

The novelette revolves around a young windowed mother named Molly Prude. She comes equipped with three cute daughters ranging in age from Sexy Teenager to Sexy Young Adult. Actually, one of her daughters is in her mid-twenties so I'm not really clear on what she's doing here, but oh well.

So yeah, with four sexy women in a town that gives out sex toys in their welcome basket, you know we're gonna see some stuff. Each character gets a chapter, and each chapter involves them getting into sexy, sexy, conundrums.

The first encounter is actually probably the hottest, but also the most taboo and might disturb some readers. The women all act with disgust toward the sex toys, but when night falls, they each grab one in secret. Molly goes from room to room, checking on her kids, and of course each one is in the process of diddling herself. The mom/daughter incest fantasy is a stereotypical male one, but it's still pretty hot, at least for me -- maybe because I'm really into female self-pleasure. In any case, for those not too into it, it doesn't really go much further than Molly peeking in, so it's easily skimmable.

The other escapades are interesting, though I did feel like the actual sex was too short. I'm not one to complain that the story needs to be all sex and nothing but sex, but many of the chapters were a lot of build up, and then clothes falling off and an orgasm in all of couple of lines. I would have liked to see more, which is absolutely a compliment to the author's writing skills.

The other complaint I have is that the daughters are too similar. It's nice, in shorter stories like these, to have some easily identifiable character traits to differentiate the protagonists. Here, the girls are all pretty interchangable, which made me care less about their reactions than I wanted to.

As I intimated above, the writing is strong and clear, and some of the situations are hot, but short. I was left wanting more, but the story was interesting enough that I want to continue with the rest of the series. Given that this entry is currently free, I'm going to Recommend that you check it out!

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